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local-zfs: correct language errors

Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
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Signed-off-by: Fiona Ebner <f.ebner@proxmox.com>
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Alexander Zeidler 2024-08-13 12:23:04 +02:00 committed by Fiona Ebner
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@ -442,8 +442,8 @@ recommend to:
# zpool create -f -o ashift=12 <pool> <device> log <log-device>
----
In above example a single `<device>` and a single `<log-device>` is used, but you
can also combine this with other RAID variants, as described in the
In the example above, a single `<device>` and a single `<log-device>` is used,
but you can also combine this with other RAID variants, as described in the
xref:sysadmin_zfs_create_new_zpool_raid0[Create a new pool with RAID] section.
You can also mirror the log device to multiple devices, this is mainly useful to
@ -465,19 +465,19 @@ protection that you want to use for improving the overall performance of your
pool.
As the maximum size of a log device should be about half the size of the
installed physical memory, it means that the ZIL will mostly likely only take up
installed physical memory, it means that the ZIL will most likely only take up
a relatively small part of the SSD, the remaining space can be used as cache.
First you have to create two GPT partitions on the SSD with `parted` or `gdisk`.
Then you're ready to add them to an pool:
Then you're ready to add them to a pool:
.Add both, a separate log device and a second-level cache, to an existing pool
----
# zpool add -f <pool> log <device-part1> cache <device-part2>
----
Just replay `<pool>`, `<device-part1>` and `<device-part2>` with the pool name
Just replace `<pool>`, `<device-part1>` and `<device-part2>` with the pool name
and the two `/dev/disk/by-id/` paths to the partitions.
You can also add ZIL and cache separately.
@ -527,8 +527,9 @@ process of the new disk has progressed.
# proxmox-boot-tool init <new disk's ESP> [grub]
----
NOTE: `ESP` stands for EFI System Partition, which is setup as partition #2 on
bootable disks setup by the {pve} installer since version 5.4. For details, see
NOTE: `ESP` stands for EFI System Partition, which is set up as partition #2 on
bootable disks when using the {pve} installer since version 5.4. For details,
see
xref:sysboot_proxmox_boot_setup[Setting up a new partition for use as synced ESP].
NOTE: Make sure to pass 'grub' as mode to `proxmox-boot-tool init` if
@ -541,7 +542,7 @@ especially if Secure Boot is enabled!
# grub-install <new disk>
----
NOTE: Plain GRUB is only used on systems installed with {pve} 6.3 or earlier,
which have not been manually migrated to using `proxmox-boot-tool` yet.
which have not been manually migrated to use `proxmox-boot-tool` yet.
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