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<refentryinfo >
<title > systemd-cryptsetup-generator</title>
<productname > systemd</productname>
</refentryinfo>
<refmeta >
<refentrytitle > systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refentrytitle>
<manvolnum > 8</manvolnum>
</refmeta>
<refnamediv >
<refname > systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refname>
<refpurpose > Unit generator for <filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> </refpurpose>
</refnamediv>
<refsynopsisdiv >
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<para > <filename > /usr/lib/systemd/system-generators/systemd-cryptsetup-generator</filename> </para>
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</refsynopsisdiv>
<refsect1 >
<title > Description</title>
<para > <filename > systemd-cryptsetup-generator</filename> is a
generator that translates <filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> into
native systemd units early at boot and when configuration of the
system manager is reloaded. This will create
<citerefentry > <refentrytitle > systemd-cryptsetup@.service</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 8</manvolnum> </citerefentry>
units as necessary.</para>
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<para > <filename > systemd-cryptsetup-generator</filename> implements
<citerefentry > <refentrytitle > systemd.generator</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 7</manvolnum> </citerefentry> .</para>
2015-02-04 05:14:13 +03:00
</refsect1>
<refsect1 >
<title > Kernel Command Line</title>
<para > <filename > systemd-cryptsetup-generator</filename>
understands the following kernel command line parameters:</para>
<variablelist class= 'kernel-commandline-options' >
<varlistentry >
<term > <varname > luks=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks=</varname> </term>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<listitem > <para > Takes a boolean argument. Defaults to <literal > yes</literal> . If
<literal > no</literal> , disables the generator entirely. <varname > rd.luks=</varname> is honored only
in the initrd while <varname > luks=</varname> is honored by both the main system and in the initrd.
2023-08-22 19:52:36 +03:00
</para>
<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v186" /> </listitem>
2015-02-04 05:14:13 +03:00
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry >
<term > <varname > luks.crypttab=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks.crypttab=</varname> </term>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<listitem > <para > Takes a boolean argument. Defaults to <literal > yes</literal> . If
<literal > no</literal> , causes the generator to ignore any devices configured in
<filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> (<varname > luks.uuid=</varname> will still work however).
<varname > rd.luks.crypttab=</varname> is honored only in initrd while
man: fix issues reported by the manpage-l10n project
Fixes #25780.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<size=>
>
> "Force LUKS mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following options are "
> "ignored since they are provided by the LUKS header on the device: "
> "I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=>"
Seems OK to me. The full stop is there and has been for at least a few years. And we use <option> for the markup, which is appropriate here.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-size=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<keyfile-offset=>, B<keyfile-size=>, B<size=>
>
> "Use TrueCrypt encryption mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following "
> "options are ignored since they are provided by the TrueCrypt header on the "
> "device or do not apply: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-"
> "size=>, I<size=>"
Same.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue 1: make be → may be
Fixed.
> Issue 2: below\\&. → below:
Fixed.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue: Colon at the end?
>
> "The following commands are understood\\&. If none is specified the default "
> "is to display journal records\\&."
> msgstr ""
> "Die folgenden Befehle werden verstanden\\&. Falls keiner festgelegt ist, ist "
> "die Anzeige von Journal-Datensätzen die Vorgabe\\&."
This is a bit awkward, but I'm not sure how to fix it.
> Man page: kernel-install.8
> Issue: methods a fallback → methods fallback
It was correct, but I added a comma to make the sense clearer.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue 1: secure boot variables → Secure Boot variables
> Issue 2: one → one for (multiple times)
>
> "Supported secure boot variables are one database for authorized images, one "
> "key exchange key (KEK) and one platform key (PK)\\&. For more information, "
> "refer to the \\m[blue]B<UEFI specification>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[2]\\d\\s+2, "
> "under Secure Boot and Driver Signing\\&. Another resource that describe the "
> "interplay of the different variables is the \\m[blue]B<EDK2 "
> "documentation>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[3]\\d\\s+2\\&."
"one of" would sound strange. "One this and one that" is OK.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-boot → B<systemd-boot>(7)
Fixed.
> Man page: logind.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-logind → B<systemd-logind>(8)
We use <filename>systemd-logind</> on subsequent references… I think that's good enough.
> Man page: nss-myhostname.8
> Issue: B<getent> → B<getent>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: nss-resolve.8
> Issue: B<systemd-resolved> → B<systemd-resolved>(8)
The first reference does this, subsequent are shorter.
> Man page: os-release.5
> Issue: Portable Services → Portable Services Documentation?
Updated.
> Man page: pam_systemd_home.8
> Issue: auth and account use "reason", while session and password do not?
Reworded.
> Man page: portablectl.1
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: The partition → the partition
Fixed.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: B<systemd-repart> → B<systemd-repart>(8)
The first reference does this. I also change this one, because it's pretty far down in the text.
> Man page: systemd.1
> Issue: kernel command line twice?
>
> "Takes a boolean argument\\&. If false disables importing credentials from "
> "the kernel command line, qemu_fw_cfg subsystem or the kernel command line\\&."
Apparently this was fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-boot.7
> Issue: enrollement → enrollment
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: multiple cases: any specified → the specified
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: If this this → If this
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-cryptsetup-generator.8
> Issue: and the initrd → and in the initrd
"Is honoured by the initrd" is OK, because we often speak about the initrd as a single unit. But in the same paragraph we also used "in the initrd", which makes the other use look sloppy. I changed it to "in the initrd" everywhere in that file.
> Man page: systemd.directives.7
> Issue: Why are these two quoted (but not others)?
>
> "B<\\*(Aqh\\*(Aq>"
>
> B<\\*(Aqs\\*(Aq>"
>
> "B<\\*(Aqy\\*(Aq>"
This is autogenerated from files… We use slightly different markup in different files, and it's just too hard to make it consistent. We gave up on this.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue 1: B<at>(1p) → B<at>(1)
> Issue 2: B<crontab>(1p) → B<crontab>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: B<select()> → B<select>(2)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: qemu → B<qemu>(1)
The man page doesn't seem to be in any of the canonical places on the web.
I added a link to online docs.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: variable → variables
Seems to be fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-integritysetup-generator → B<systemd-integritysetup-generator>
I changed <filename> to <command>.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: superfluous comma at the end
Already fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: (see B<--pcr-bank=>) below → (see B<--pcr-bank=> below)
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: =PATH> → =>I<PATH>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1.po
> Issue: B<--bank=DIGEST> → B<--bank=>I<DIGEST>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: os the → on the
Appears to have been fixed already.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: Onboard → On-board (as in previous string)
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<systemd-networkd> -> B<systemd-networkd>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<netlabelctl> → B<netlabelctl>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: Missing verb (aquired? configured?) in the half sentence starting with "or by a "
I dropped the comma.
> Man page: systemd-nspawn.1
> Issue: All host users outside of that range → All other host users
Reworded.
> # FIXME no effect → no effect\\&.
> #. type: Plain text
> #: archlinux debian-unstable fedora-rawhide mageia-cauldron opensuse-tumbleweed
> msgid ""
> "Whichever ID mapping option is used, the same mapping will be used for users "
> "and groups IDs\\&. If B<rootidmap> is used, the group owning the bind "
> "mounted directory will have no effect"
A period is added. Not sure if there's some other issue.
> Man page: systemd-oomd.service.8
> Issue: B<systemd> → B<systemd>(1)
Done.
> Man page: systemd.path.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue 1: indicate phases into TPM2 PCR 11 ??
> Issue 2: Colon at the end of the paragraph?
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: final boot phase → final shutdown phase?
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: for the the → for the
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-portabled.service.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pstore.service.8
> Issue: Here and the following paragraphs: . → \\&. // Upstream: What does this comment mean? // You normally write \\&. for a full dot (full stop etc.); here you write only "." (i.e. a plain dot).
>
> "and we look up \"localhost\", nss-dns will send the following queries to "
> "systemd-resolved listening on 127.0.0.53:53: first \"localhost.foobar.com\", "
> "then \"localhost.barbar.com\", and finally \"localhost\". If (hopefully) the "
> "first two queries fail, systemd-resolved will synthesize an answer for the "
> "third query."
Looks all OK to me.
> Man page: systemd.resource-control.5
> Issue: Missing closing bracket after link to Control Groups version 1
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-sysext.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.timer.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.unit.5
> Issue: that is → that are
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-veritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-veritysetup-generator → B<systemd-veritysetup-generator>
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator implements B<systemd.generator>(7)\\&."
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator understands the following kernel command line "
> "parameters:"
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-volatile-root.service.8
> Issue: initrdyes → Initrd
Fixed.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: : → \\&. (As above in TRANSFER)
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: some → certain
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue 1: i\\&.e\\& → I\\&.e\\&
Fixed.
> Issue 2: the image → the system
"image" seems correct.
> Man page: tmpfiles.d.5
> Issue: systemd-tmpfiles → B<systemd-tmpfiles>(8)
Updated.
2023-01-11 18:45:59 +03:00
<varname > luks.crypttab=</varname> is honored by both the main system and in the initrd.
2023-08-22 19:52:36 +03:00
</para>
<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v186" /> </listitem>
2015-02-04 05:14:13 +03:00
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry >
<term > <varname > luks.uuid=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> </term>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<listitem > <para > Takes a LUKS superblock UUID as argument. This will activate the specified device as
part of the boot process as if it was listed in <filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> . This option may
be specified more than once in order to set up multiple devices. <varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> is
honored only in the initrd, while <varname > luks.uuid=</varname> is honored by both the main system
man: fix issues reported by the manpage-l10n project
Fixes #25780.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<size=>
>
> "Force LUKS mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following options are "
> "ignored since they are provided by the LUKS header on the device: "
> "I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=>"
Seems OK to me. The full stop is there and has been for at least a few years. And we use <option> for the markup, which is appropriate here.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-size=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<keyfile-offset=>, B<keyfile-size=>, B<size=>
>
> "Use TrueCrypt encryption mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following "
> "options are ignored since they are provided by the TrueCrypt header on the "
> "device or do not apply: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-"
> "size=>, I<size=>"
Same.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue 1: make be → may be
Fixed.
> Issue 2: below\\&. → below:
Fixed.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue: Colon at the end?
>
> "The following commands are understood\\&. If none is specified the default "
> "is to display journal records\\&."
> msgstr ""
> "Die folgenden Befehle werden verstanden\\&. Falls keiner festgelegt ist, ist "
> "die Anzeige von Journal-Datensätzen die Vorgabe\\&."
This is a bit awkward, but I'm not sure how to fix it.
> Man page: kernel-install.8
> Issue: methods a fallback → methods fallback
It was correct, but I added a comma to make the sense clearer.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue 1: secure boot variables → Secure Boot variables
> Issue 2: one → one for (multiple times)
>
> "Supported secure boot variables are one database for authorized images, one "
> "key exchange key (KEK) and one platform key (PK)\\&. For more information, "
> "refer to the \\m[blue]B<UEFI specification>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[2]\\d\\s+2, "
> "under Secure Boot and Driver Signing\\&. Another resource that describe the "
> "interplay of the different variables is the \\m[blue]B<EDK2 "
> "documentation>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[3]\\d\\s+2\\&."
"one of" would sound strange. "One this and one that" is OK.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-boot → B<systemd-boot>(7)
Fixed.
> Man page: logind.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-logind → B<systemd-logind>(8)
We use <filename>systemd-logind</> on subsequent references… I think that's good enough.
> Man page: nss-myhostname.8
> Issue: B<getent> → B<getent>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: nss-resolve.8
> Issue: B<systemd-resolved> → B<systemd-resolved>(8)
The first reference does this, subsequent are shorter.
> Man page: os-release.5
> Issue: Portable Services → Portable Services Documentation?
Updated.
> Man page: pam_systemd_home.8
> Issue: auth and account use "reason", while session and password do not?
Reworded.
> Man page: portablectl.1
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: The partition → the partition
Fixed.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: B<systemd-repart> → B<systemd-repart>(8)
The first reference does this. I also change this one, because it's pretty far down in the text.
> Man page: systemd.1
> Issue: kernel command line twice?
>
> "Takes a boolean argument\\&. If false disables importing credentials from "
> "the kernel command line, qemu_fw_cfg subsystem or the kernel command line\\&."
Apparently this was fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-boot.7
> Issue: enrollement → enrollment
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: multiple cases: any specified → the specified
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: If this this → If this
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-cryptsetup-generator.8
> Issue: and the initrd → and in the initrd
"Is honoured by the initrd" is OK, because we often speak about the initrd as a single unit. But in the same paragraph we also used "in the initrd", which makes the other use look sloppy. I changed it to "in the initrd" everywhere in that file.
> Man page: systemd.directives.7
> Issue: Why are these two quoted (but not others)?
>
> "B<\\*(Aqh\\*(Aq>"
>
> B<\\*(Aqs\\*(Aq>"
>
> "B<\\*(Aqy\\*(Aq>"
This is autogenerated from files… We use slightly different markup in different files, and it's just too hard to make it consistent. We gave up on this.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue 1: B<at>(1p) → B<at>(1)
> Issue 2: B<crontab>(1p) → B<crontab>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: B<select()> → B<select>(2)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: qemu → B<qemu>(1)
The man page doesn't seem to be in any of the canonical places on the web.
I added a link to online docs.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: variable → variables
Seems to be fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-integritysetup-generator → B<systemd-integritysetup-generator>
I changed <filename> to <command>.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: superfluous comma at the end
Already fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: (see B<--pcr-bank=>) below → (see B<--pcr-bank=> below)
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: =PATH> → =>I<PATH>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1.po
> Issue: B<--bank=DIGEST> → B<--bank=>I<DIGEST>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: os the → on the
Appears to have been fixed already.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: Onboard → On-board (as in previous string)
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<systemd-networkd> -> B<systemd-networkd>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<netlabelctl> → B<netlabelctl>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: Missing verb (aquired? configured?) in the half sentence starting with "or by a "
I dropped the comma.
> Man page: systemd-nspawn.1
> Issue: All host users outside of that range → All other host users
Reworded.
> # FIXME no effect → no effect\\&.
> #. type: Plain text
> #: archlinux debian-unstable fedora-rawhide mageia-cauldron opensuse-tumbleweed
> msgid ""
> "Whichever ID mapping option is used, the same mapping will be used for users "
> "and groups IDs\\&. If B<rootidmap> is used, the group owning the bind "
> "mounted directory will have no effect"
A period is added. Not sure if there's some other issue.
> Man page: systemd-oomd.service.8
> Issue: B<systemd> → B<systemd>(1)
Done.
> Man page: systemd.path.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue 1: indicate phases into TPM2 PCR 11 ??
> Issue 2: Colon at the end of the paragraph?
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: final boot phase → final shutdown phase?
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: for the the → for the
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-portabled.service.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pstore.service.8
> Issue: Here and the following paragraphs: . → \\&. // Upstream: What does this comment mean? // You normally write \\&. for a full dot (full stop etc.); here you write only "." (i.e. a plain dot).
>
> "and we look up \"localhost\", nss-dns will send the following queries to "
> "systemd-resolved listening on 127.0.0.53:53: first \"localhost.foobar.com\", "
> "then \"localhost.barbar.com\", and finally \"localhost\". If (hopefully) the "
> "first two queries fail, systemd-resolved will synthesize an answer for the "
> "third query."
Looks all OK to me.
> Man page: systemd.resource-control.5
> Issue: Missing closing bracket after link to Control Groups version 1
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-sysext.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.timer.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.unit.5
> Issue: that is → that are
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-veritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-veritysetup-generator → B<systemd-veritysetup-generator>
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator implements B<systemd.generator>(7)\\&."
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator understands the following kernel command line "
> "parameters:"
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-volatile-root.service.8
> Issue: initrdyes → Initrd
Fixed.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: : → \\&. (As above in TRANSFER)
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: some → certain
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue 1: i\\&.e\\& → I\\&.e\\&
Fixed.
> Issue 2: the image → the system
"image" seems correct.
> Man page: tmpfiles.d.5
> Issue: systemd-tmpfiles → B<systemd-tmpfiles>(8)
Updated.
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and in the initrd.</para>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
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<para > If <filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> contains entries with the same UUID, then the name,
keyfile and options specified there will be used. Otherwise, the device will have the name
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<literal > luks-UUID</literal> .</para>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<para > If <filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> exists, only those UUIDs specified on the kernel command
line will be activated in the initrd or the real root.</para>
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<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v186" />
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</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry >
<term > <varname > luks.name=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks.name=</varname> </term>
<listitem > <para > Takes a LUKS super block UUID followed by an
<literal > =</literal> and a name. This implies
<varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> or
<varname > luks.uuid=</varname> and will additionally make the
LUKS device given by the UUID appear under the provided
name.</para>
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<para > This parameter is the analogue of the first <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > crypttab</refentrytitle>
<manvolnum > 5</manvolnum> </citerefentry> field <replaceable > volume-name</replaceable> .</para>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<para > <varname > rd.luks.name=</varname> is honored only in the initrd, while
man: fix issues reported by the manpage-l10n project
Fixes #25780.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<size=>
>
> "Force LUKS mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following options are "
> "ignored since they are provided by the LUKS header on the device: "
> "I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=>"
Seems OK to me. The full stop is there and has been for at least a few years. And we use <option> for the markup, which is appropriate here.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-size=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<keyfile-offset=>, B<keyfile-size=>, B<size=>
>
> "Use TrueCrypt encryption mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following "
> "options are ignored since they are provided by the TrueCrypt header on the "
> "device or do not apply: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-"
> "size=>, I<size=>"
Same.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue 1: make be → may be
Fixed.
> Issue 2: below\\&. → below:
Fixed.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue: Colon at the end?
>
> "The following commands are understood\\&. If none is specified the default "
> "is to display journal records\\&."
> msgstr ""
> "Die folgenden Befehle werden verstanden\\&. Falls keiner festgelegt ist, ist "
> "die Anzeige von Journal-Datensätzen die Vorgabe\\&."
This is a bit awkward, but I'm not sure how to fix it.
> Man page: kernel-install.8
> Issue: methods a fallback → methods fallback
It was correct, but I added a comma to make the sense clearer.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue 1: secure boot variables → Secure Boot variables
> Issue 2: one → one for (multiple times)
>
> "Supported secure boot variables are one database for authorized images, one "
> "key exchange key (KEK) and one platform key (PK)\\&. For more information, "
> "refer to the \\m[blue]B<UEFI specification>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[2]\\d\\s+2, "
> "under Secure Boot and Driver Signing\\&. Another resource that describe the "
> "interplay of the different variables is the \\m[blue]B<EDK2 "
> "documentation>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[3]\\d\\s+2\\&."
"one of" would sound strange. "One this and one that" is OK.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-boot → B<systemd-boot>(7)
Fixed.
> Man page: logind.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-logind → B<systemd-logind>(8)
We use <filename>systemd-logind</> on subsequent references… I think that's good enough.
> Man page: nss-myhostname.8
> Issue: B<getent> → B<getent>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: nss-resolve.8
> Issue: B<systemd-resolved> → B<systemd-resolved>(8)
The first reference does this, subsequent are shorter.
> Man page: os-release.5
> Issue: Portable Services → Portable Services Documentation?
Updated.
> Man page: pam_systemd_home.8
> Issue: auth and account use "reason", while session and password do not?
Reworded.
> Man page: portablectl.1
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: The partition → the partition
Fixed.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: B<systemd-repart> → B<systemd-repart>(8)
The first reference does this. I also change this one, because it's pretty far down in the text.
> Man page: systemd.1
> Issue: kernel command line twice?
>
> "Takes a boolean argument\\&. If false disables importing credentials from "
> "the kernel command line, qemu_fw_cfg subsystem or the kernel command line\\&."
Apparently this was fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-boot.7
> Issue: enrollement → enrollment
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: multiple cases: any specified → the specified
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: If this this → If this
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-cryptsetup-generator.8
> Issue: and the initrd → and in the initrd
"Is honoured by the initrd" is OK, because we often speak about the initrd as a single unit. But in the same paragraph we also used "in the initrd", which makes the other use look sloppy. I changed it to "in the initrd" everywhere in that file.
> Man page: systemd.directives.7
> Issue: Why are these two quoted (but not others)?
>
> "B<\\*(Aqh\\*(Aq>"
>
> B<\\*(Aqs\\*(Aq>"
>
> "B<\\*(Aqy\\*(Aq>"
This is autogenerated from files… We use slightly different markup in different files, and it's just too hard to make it consistent. We gave up on this.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue 1: B<at>(1p) → B<at>(1)
> Issue 2: B<crontab>(1p) → B<crontab>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: B<select()> → B<select>(2)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: qemu → B<qemu>(1)
The man page doesn't seem to be in any of the canonical places on the web.
I added a link to online docs.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: variable → variables
Seems to be fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-integritysetup-generator → B<systemd-integritysetup-generator>
I changed <filename> to <command>.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: superfluous comma at the end
Already fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: (see B<--pcr-bank=>) below → (see B<--pcr-bank=> below)
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: =PATH> → =>I<PATH>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1.po
> Issue: B<--bank=DIGEST> → B<--bank=>I<DIGEST>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: os the → on the
Appears to have been fixed already.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: Onboard → On-board (as in previous string)
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<systemd-networkd> -> B<systemd-networkd>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<netlabelctl> → B<netlabelctl>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: Missing verb (aquired? configured?) in the half sentence starting with "or by a "
I dropped the comma.
> Man page: systemd-nspawn.1
> Issue: All host users outside of that range → All other host users
Reworded.
> # FIXME no effect → no effect\\&.
> #. type: Plain text
> #: archlinux debian-unstable fedora-rawhide mageia-cauldron opensuse-tumbleweed
> msgid ""
> "Whichever ID mapping option is used, the same mapping will be used for users "
> "and groups IDs\\&. If B<rootidmap> is used, the group owning the bind "
> "mounted directory will have no effect"
A period is added. Not sure if there's some other issue.
> Man page: systemd-oomd.service.8
> Issue: B<systemd> → B<systemd>(1)
Done.
> Man page: systemd.path.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue 1: indicate phases into TPM2 PCR 11 ??
> Issue 2: Colon at the end of the paragraph?
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: final boot phase → final shutdown phase?
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: for the the → for the
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-portabled.service.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pstore.service.8
> Issue: Here and the following paragraphs: . → \\&. // Upstream: What does this comment mean? // You normally write \\&. for a full dot (full stop etc.); here you write only "." (i.e. a plain dot).
>
> "and we look up \"localhost\", nss-dns will send the following queries to "
> "systemd-resolved listening on 127.0.0.53:53: first \"localhost.foobar.com\", "
> "then \"localhost.barbar.com\", and finally \"localhost\". If (hopefully) the "
> "first two queries fail, systemd-resolved will synthesize an answer for the "
> "third query."
Looks all OK to me.
> Man page: systemd.resource-control.5
> Issue: Missing closing bracket after link to Control Groups version 1
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-sysext.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.timer.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.unit.5
> Issue: that is → that are
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-veritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-veritysetup-generator → B<systemd-veritysetup-generator>
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator implements B<systemd.generator>(7)\\&."
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator understands the following kernel command line "
> "parameters:"
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-volatile-root.service.8
> Issue: initrdyes → Initrd
Fixed.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: : → \\&. (As above in TRANSFER)
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: some → certain
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue 1: i\\&.e\\& → I\\&.e\\&
Fixed.
> Issue 2: the image → the system
"image" seems correct.
> Man page: tmpfiles.d.5
> Issue: systemd-tmpfiles → B<systemd-tmpfiles>(8)
Updated.
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<varname > luks.name=</varname> is honored by both the main system and in the initrd.</para>
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<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v218" />
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</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry >
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<term > <varname > luks.data=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks.data=</varname> </term>
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<listitem > <para > Takes a LUKS super block UUID followed by a <literal > =</literal> and a block device
specification for device hosting encrypted data.</para>
<para > For those entries specified with <varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> or
<varname > luks.uuid=</varname> , the data device will be set to the one specified by
<varname > rd.luks.data=</varname> or <varname > luks.data=</varname> of the corresponding UUID.</para>
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<para > LUKS data device parameter is useful for specifying encrypted data devices with detached headers specified in
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<varname > luks.options</varname> entry containing <literal > header=</literal> argument. For example,
<varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40
<varname > rd.luks.options=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40=header=/path/to/luks.hdr
<varname > rd.luks.data=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40=/dev/sdx.
Hence, in this case, we will attempt to unlock LUKS device assembled from data device <literal > /dev/sdx</literal>
and LUKS header (metadata) put in <literal > /path/to/luks.hdr</literal> file. This syntax is for now
only supported on a per-device basis, i.e. you have to specify LUKS device UUID.</para>
<para > This parameter is the analogue of the second <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > crypttab</refentrytitle>
<manvolnum > 5</manvolnum> </citerefentry> field <replaceable > encrypted-device</replaceable> .</para>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<para > <varname > rd.luks.data=</varname> is honored only in the initrd, while
<varname > luks.data=</varname> is honored by both the main system and in the initrd.</para>
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<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v247" />
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</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry >
<term > <varname > luks.key=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks.key=</varname> </term>
<listitem > <para > Takes a password file name as argument or a
LUKS super block UUID followed by a <literal > =</literal> and a
password file name.</para>
<para > For those entries specified with
<varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> or
<varname > luks.uuid=</varname> , the password file will be set
to the one specified by <varname > rd.luks.key=</varname> or
<varname > luks.key=</varname> of the corresponding UUID, or the
password file that was specified without a UUID.</para>
2018-08-30 11:45:11 +03:00
<para > It is also possible to specify an external device which
should be mounted before we attempt to unlock the LUKS device.
systemd-cryptsetup will use password file stored on that
device. Device containing password file is specified by
appending colon and a device identifier to the password file
path. For example,
<varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40
<varname > rd.luks.key=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40=/keyfile:LABEL=keydev.
Hence, in this case, we will attempt to mount file system
residing on the block device with label <literal > keydev</literal> .
This syntax is for now only supported on a per-device basis,
i.e. you have to specify LUKS device UUID.</para>
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<para > This parameter is the analogue of the third <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > crypttab</refentrytitle>
<manvolnum > 5</manvolnum> </citerefentry> field <replaceable > key-file</replaceable> .</para>
man: "the initial RAM disk" → "the initrd"
In many places we spelled out the phrase behind "initrd" in full, but this
isn't terribly useful. In fact, no "RAM disk" is used, so emphasizing this
is just confusing to the reader. Let's just say "initrd" everywhere, people
understand what this refers to, and that it's in fact an initramfs image.
Also, s/i.e./e.g./ where appropriate.
Also, don't say "in RAM", when in fact it's virtual memory, whose pages
may or may not be loaded in page frames in RAM, and we have no control over
this.
Also, add <filename></filename> and other minor cleanups.
2022-09-15 15:43:59 +03:00
<para > <varname > rd.luks.key=</varname> is honored only in the initrd, while
<varname > luks.key=</varname> is honored by both the main system and in the initrd.</para>
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<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v202" />
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</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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<varlistentry >
<term > <varname > luks.options=</varname> </term>
<term > <varname > rd.luks.options=</varname> </term>
<listitem > <para > Takes a LUKS super block UUID followed by an
<literal > =</literal> and a string of options separated by
commas as argument. This will override the options for the
given UUID.</para>
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<para > If only a list of options, without a UUID, is
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specified, they apply to any UUIDs not specified elsewhere,
and without an entry in
<filename > /etc/crypttab</filename> .</para>
<para > This parameter is the analogue of the fourth <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > crypttab</refentrytitle>
<manvolnum > 5</manvolnum> </citerefentry> field <replaceable > options</replaceable> .</para>
<para > It is possible to specify an external device which
should be mounted before we attempt to unlock the LUKS device.
systemd-cryptsetup will assemble LUKS device by combining
data device specified in <varname > luks.data</varname> with
detached LUKS header found in <literal > header=</literal>
argument. For example,
<varname > rd.luks.uuid=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40
<varname > rd.luks.options=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40=header=/luks.hdr:LABEL=hdrdev
<varname > rd.luks.data=</varname> b40f1abf-2a53-400a-889a-2eccc27eaa40=/dev/sdx.
Hence, in this case, we will attempt to mount file system
residing on the block device with label <literal > hdrdev</literal> , and look
for <literal > luks.hdr</literal> on that file system. Said header will be used
to unlock (decrypt) encrypted data stored on /dev/sdx.
This syntax is for now only supported on a per-device basis,
i.e. you have to specify LUKS device UUID.</para>
<para > <varname > rd.luks.options=</varname> is honored only by initial
RAM disk (initrd) while <varname > luks.options=</varname> is
man: fix issues reported by the manpage-l10n project
Fixes #25780.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<size=>
>
> "Force LUKS mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following options are "
> "ignored since they are provided by the LUKS header on the device: "
> "I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=>"
Seems OK to me. The full stop is there and has been for at least a few years. And we use <option> for the markup, which is appropriate here.
> Man page: crypttab.5
> Issue 1: Missing fullstop
> Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-size=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<keyfile-offset=>, B<keyfile-size=>, B<size=>
>
> "Use TrueCrypt encryption mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following "
> "options are ignored since they are provided by the TrueCrypt header on the "
> "device or do not apply: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-"
> "size=>, I<size=>"
Same.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue 1: make be → may be
Fixed.
> Issue 2: below\\&. → below:
Fixed.
> Man page: journalctl.1
> Issue: Colon at the end?
>
> "The following commands are understood\\&. If none is specified the default "
> "is to display journal records\\&."
> msgstr ""
> "Die folgenden Befehle werden verstanden\\&. Falls keiner festgelegt ist, ist "
> "die Anzeige von Journal-Datensätzen die Vorgabe\\&."
This is a bit awkward, but I'm not sure how to fix it.
> Man page: kernel-install.8
> Issue: methods a fallback → methods fallback
It was correct, but I added a comma to make the sense clearer.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue 1: secure boot variables → Secure Boot variables
> Issue 2: one → one for (multiple times)
>
> "Supported secure boot variables are one database for authorized images, one "
> "key exchange key (KEK) and one platform key (PK)\\&. For more information, "
> "refer to the \\m[blue]B<UEFI specification>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[2]\\d\\s+2, "
> "under Secure Boot and Driver Signing\\&. Another resource that describe the "
> "interplay of the different variables is the \\m[blue]B<EDK2 "
> "documentation>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[3]\\d\\s+2\\&."
"one of" would sound strange. "One this and one that" is OK.
> Man page: loader.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-boot → B<systemd-boot>(7)
Fixed.
> Man page: logind.conf.5
> Issue: systemd-logind → B<systemd-logind>(8)
We use <filename>systemd-logind</> on subsequent references… I think that's good enough.
> Man page: nss-myhostname.8
> Issue: B<getent> → B<getent>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: nss-resolve.8
> Issue: B<systemd-resolved> → B<systemd-resolved>(8)
The first reference does this, subsequent are shorter.
> Man page: os-release.5
> Issue: Portable Services → Portable Services Documentation?
Updated.
> Man page: pam_systemd_home.8
> Issue: auth and account use "reason", while session and password do not?
Reworded.
> Man page: portablectl.1
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: The partition → the partition
Fixed.
> Man page: repart.d.5
> Issue: B<systemd-repart> → B<systemd-repart>(8)
The first reference does this. I also change this one, because it's pretty far down in the text.
> Man page: systemd.1
> Issue: kernel command line twice?
>
> "Takes a boolean argument\\&. If false disables importing credentials from "
> "the kernel command line, qemu_fw_cfg subsystem or the kernel command line\\&."
Apparently this was fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-boot.7
> Issue: enrollement → enrollment
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: multiple cases: any specified → the specified
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1
> Issue: If this this → If this
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-cryptsetup-generator.8
> Issue: and the initrd → and in the initrd
"Is honoured by the initrd" is OK, because we often speak about the initrd as a single unit. But in the same paragraph we also used "in the initrd", which makes the other use look sloppy. I changed it to "in the initrd" everywhere in that file.
> Man page: systemd.directives.7
> Issue: Why are these two quoted (but not others)?
>
> "B<\\*(Aqh\\*(Aq>"
>
> B<\\*(Aqs\\*(Aq>"
>
> "B<\\*(Aqy\\*(Aq>"
This is autogenerated from files… We use slightly different markup in different files, and it's just too hard to make it consistent. We gave up on this.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue 1: B<at>(1p) → B<at>(1)
> Issue 2: B<crontab>(1p) → B<crontab>(1)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: B<select()> → B<select>(2)
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: qemu → B<qemu>(1)
The man page doesn't seem to be in any of the canonical places on the web.
I added a link to online docs.
> Man page: systemd.exec.5
> Issue: variable → variables
Seems to be fixed already.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-integritysetup-generator → B<systemd-integritysetup-generator>
I changed <filename> to <command>.
> Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: superfluous comma at the end
Already fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: (see B<--pcr-bank=>) below → (see B<--pcr-bank=> below)
Reworded.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1
> Issue: =PATH> → =>I<PATH>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-measure.1.po
> Issue: B<--bank=DIGEST> → B<--bank=>I<DIGEST>
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: os the → on the
Appears to have been fixed already.
> Man page: systemd.netdev.5
> Issue: Onboard → On-board (as in previous string)
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<systemd-networkd> -> B<systemd-networkd>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: B<netlabelctl> → B<netlabelctl>(8)
First reference does this, subsequent do not.
> Man page: systemd.network.5
> Issue: Missing verb (aquired? configured?) in the half sentence starting with "or by a "
I dropped the comma.
> Man page: systemd-nspawn.1
> Issue: All host users outside of that range → All other host users
Reworded.
> # FIXME no effect → no effect\\&.
> #. type: Plain text
> #: archlinux debian-unstable fedora-rawhide mageia-cauldron opensuse-tumbleweed
> msgid ""
> "Whichever ID mapping option is used, the same mapping will be used for users "
> "and groups IDs\\&. If B<rootidmap> is used, the group owning the bind "
> "mounted directory will have no effect"
A period is added. Not sure if there's some other issue.
> Man page: systemd-oomd.service.8
> Issue: B<systemd> → B<systemd>(1)
Done.
> Man page: systemd.path.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue 1: indicate phases into TPM2 PCR 11 ??
> Issue 2: Colon at the end of the paragraph?
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: final boot phase → final shutdown phase?
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8
> Issue: for the the → for the
Fixed tree-wide.
> Man page: systemd-portabled.service.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-pstore.service.8
> Issue: Here and the following paragraphs: . → \\&. // Upstream: What does this comment mean? // You normally write \\&. for a full dot (full stop etc.); here you write only "." (i.e. a plain dot).
>
> "and we look up \"localhost\", nss-dns will send the following queries to "
> "systemd-resolved listening on 127.0.0.53:53: first \"localhost.foobar.com\", "
> "then \"localhost.barbar.com\", and finally \"localhost\". If (hopefully) the "
> "first two queries fail, systemd-resolved will synthesize an answer for the "
> "third query."
Looks all OK to me.
> Man page: systemd.resource-control.5
> Issue: Missing closing bracket after link to Control Groups version 1
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-sysext.8
> Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation
Updated.
> Man page: systemd.timer.5
> Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5)
> Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd.unit.5
> Issue: that is → that are
Fixed.
> Man page: systemd-veritysetup-generator.8
> Issue: systemd-veritysetup-generator → B<systemd-veritysetup-generator>
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator implements B<systemd.generator>(7)\\&."
>
> "systemd-veritysetup-generator understands the following kernel command line "
> "parameters:"
Updated.
> Man page: systemd-volatile-root.service.8
> Issue: initrdyes → Initrd
Fixed.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: : → \\&. (As above in TRANSFER)
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue: some → certain
Updated.
> Man page: sysupdate.d.5
> Issue 1: i\\&.e\\& → I\\&.e\\&
Fixed.
> Issue 2: the image → the system
"image" seems correct.
> Man page: tmpfiles.d.5
> Issue: systemd-tmpfiles → B<systemd-tmpfiles>(8)
Updated.
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honored by both the main system and in the initrd.</para>
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<xi:include href= "version-info.xml" xpointer= "v208" />
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</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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</variablelist>
</refsect1>
<refsect1 >
<title > See Also</title>
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<para > <simplelist type= "inline" >
<member > <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > systemd</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 1</manvolnum> </citerefentry> </member>
<member > <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > crypttab</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 5</manvolnum> </citerefentry> </member>
<member > <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > systemd-cryptsetup@.service</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 8</manvolnum> </citerefentry> </member>
<member > <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > systemd-cryptenroll</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 1</manvolnum> </citerefentry> </member>
<member > <citerefentry project= 'die-net' > <refentrytitle > cryptsetup</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 8</manvolnum> </citerefentry> </member>
<member > <citerefentry > <refentrytitle > systemd-fstab-generator</refentrytitle> <manvolnum > 8</manvolnum> </citerefentry> </member>
</simplelist> </para>
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</refsect1>
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</refentry>
